Wow...amazing!

Awesome job.

I like this it is good. So much emotion.

Wow you are such a good writer! and you have such a unique way about it to i loved how you pieced this one 5/5 <33

It totally is me

THAT WAS VERY NICE
I LOVED IT :)

LULLABY

Ohh my GOD :O what a write.
I love the repetition. I've tried it in a number of my poems, but never got the effect you have here. Emotion tugging at every word.

Love it. 5/5

WOW!!
^_^ thats really good

Simple and very effective, such strong emotions flow through this piece and in such a well written way. excellent poem.

This poem is effin awesome i love it

This poem is amazing.
you are a wonderful poet.
i feel the pain and emotion.

Omg, i can feel the pain in this short poem.. =)

The way that you penned this reads differently than most in this genre; it doesn't seem to be stated in a sad tone so much as it does in a matter of fact, disassociated tone, or maybe that's just me. In either case it's nicely written and unforced and the form itself is a welcome change of pace.

Fantastic !! I can relate.

Wow..this was amazing..!!!