Your the one

by kim   Feb 2, 2007


My knees start to shake when you are in sight my mind is filled with wonder my heart filled with frieght when will this feeling stop when did it start how can i listen to my mind without breaking my heart i am so confused what should i do i cant think of anything accept for you should i ignore you or just give it time i cant think straight my heart controls my mind.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ImmortalKitty

    Awesome, true emotions, sentences flow together, I would suggest only to seperate your sentences like this
    "My knees start to shake when you are in sight
    my mind is filled with wonder my heart filled with frieght" you see what i did.

  • 19 years ago

    by dude

    Hey i liked this poem love can be confusing thats what i got from this poem 5/5 joey