Nice collab guys....

"So here I am today
With the one I love
Hoping she won't stray
But instead belove"

What sweet sentiment. Good job!

Thts so sweet!!!

God bless u

Wooooooooooo yall are a total team. I wish I participated in this one. 5/5 for sure.

Awwh, I thought this was really sweet.
I think the imagery was really good, it created vivid pictures for me.
I thought the flow worked well and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and wording.
Good work!

Wow, you guys have done a great job, keep up the great work.

That was really cute and lovely, althought I think it was really simplistic comparred to your other poems....

(i no i cant spell) ^_^"

Wow.
that was a amazing poem.

"So here I am today
With the one I love
Hoping she won't stray
But instead belove"

that is great:]
you did a really good job.
5/5

Hey joe! Great poem! Nice collaboration. I love the ending.. very sweet. Keep it up! =)

Great collab its an amazing poem its sweet it shows heaps of emotion too 5/5

--emz--

I loved the poem. It was so sweet and beautifully written. I always enjoy reading your poems you are able to capture so much emotion.

I loved the last stanza of this poem so much it flowed probably the best and the lines and meaning were perfect they basically sum everything up
5/5

This is so pretty, and touching, wow i almost started crying... very very beautifull... 5/5

This is so sweet , this is such a great poem all though it i was saying aww!!!...=] 5/5

I don't like rhyming too much, it lacks originality, I think if you want to rhyme than be unique.
Nice poem, it is interesting, but it did not kept my attention, sorry just my opinion, but I think that it could be more intense on some parts.

Very cute=]

That was awesome.
I loved how you wrote that...
=]

Awww... another well penned love story. If only we could all be lucky enough to enjoy this love that you both have spoken about.

~~Sher

This is also an amazing piece i really love the way that it goes 5/5 Caleb H