Wow..Did I really just read that?!?! Just...Wow. Great poems!!!! I really liked this one cause it was exactly how I was/felt in grade school!! 5/5.. Keep up the good work!
~Shae

David.. one thing straight ur not ugly. and no matter wat kind of idiot says u r they r wrong and only jelous :P dnt let silent me get to you he is a tool and needs to get put back in his place. Keep that chin up dave and parade ur good looks :)

Yeah lol thats for the vote i dont know how this voting system works either i voted a 5 here coz i can relate to the pome in a way. :) its really good :))

Well im pretty sure ur not ugly :) i used to think that when i had a really bad hair cut but i relised its whats on the inside that counts and im better than ever now :) so keep ur head up

nd omg static used my word lol i call heaps of pplz tools lol

Good job, interesting topics. "your" should be you're. Some things you can do to make it better is to expand your vocabulary, add more imagery, variety and maybe start without rhymes first. I did and it helped. The first stanza was fine.
Try something like:

Even flowers bled at my face,
It's skin set like white paste
While you dance with natural flair
Ugliness cringe when you stare

Man the way u write, theres no way u cud be ugly. come on, u can write beautifuly. that's not what i call ugly. 5/5

This is a very good poem.
I rate this a 5, because I think that more people think that way about themselves, people who are very uncertain.
The way you put it into words is perfect.
keep going

Very good i like it alot...very interesting writing...where did you find the idea to write something like this???

Mandz

This is a perfectly written poem, great job, you have a grea talent. keep it up

You should never think thoughts about yourself like that i mean i feel like a hypocrit for saying that but this is such a good poem and without even knowing what you look like I can tell your beautiful !_!

Its funny speaking of ugly. why is it
that the prettiest people do the uglyiess things.
your poem was so sad .really well written 5/5

That is sad. i know a lot of people are teased because the are 'ugly' to some people. i have been tease like that myself. and i know how much it hurts and how u start thinking that u r ugly.
Great poem btw. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Kalee

This is one that brought a tear to my eye ,no one is ugly ,its what is on the inside that counts ,and going on what I have read of your work you have a lot going for you.