Well done youngman. It flowed nicely. But you must understand that the teen years are very hard for most. It's the time in your life that you are try to find out who you are and what you want out of this life. May you find the peace and joy that you seek deep within your heart.

sadaddy

This was wonderful! 5/5
It was the first of yours I've read and loved it. I hope that everything works out for you.
The best, Morgana

Beautiful poem ...... i could feel the emotion ..... well penned ..... 5/5

keep it the great writting

Chan
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Trippy, and pretty damn good.