Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)

Aww yeah that was cute! i thought that was what you were going for. again the only thing i'd change would be the length, but this one was so cute, i loved it really. wonderful job again, of course another 5/5

I dig it. I like that you can write a few lines and say what you want. I have a nasty habit of being wordy. Kudos.

Lol.. very cute poem... flawless flow.. and great rhymes.. none of them seemed the least bit forced or cliche... my only suggestion is to tak off where you tell us your were trying to make a humrous approach about the annoying things loved ones do because unlike your other poems.. the message in this is clear.. so i just think it isnt neessary to tell us that..

Haha, this is so true! Very cute write. It was a different approach to a love poem. Nothing I expected. Amazing write hun, the imagery was great. I imagined every bit of it. Hehe, loved it! 5/5

-Thank you for your comment, and criticism on my poem.

This is cute and I can relate as my husband is sometimes hard to share a bed with!

Great job! This is really a great piece! Take Care Cindy

I thought it was great. Nice poem.

Amaaazzziiinnngg i loved it. It's so true

Haha, great poem. Brilliant way of mixing sweetness and humor. Love seems to work best that way. Definitely brings fond memories to mind