Comments : Forgotten

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job on this one! It is funny how we think we could never live without someone. Then we think how we ever lived with them! Glad you have moved on. Great write. Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    "I've regained my sanity, now I sleep at night"

    I really like this line, it really stood out for me out the poem. I'm not sure what it is about it that I love so much. I guess it's just all 100% true. You gotta regain sanity to sleep at night, and I loved it! You're awesome!

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Great write....time does heal all wounds and there is a life after a break-up...glad you found it!
    "I've forgot it all, good and bad alike.
    I've regained my sanity, now I sleep at night.
    I've found myself a love so strong and true.
    All the joy I found was after I forgot you."

    Nice verse! Keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    I've found myself a love so strong and true.
    All the joy I found was after I forgot you.
    Great write!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    It is ironic that in the moment when the one you love hurts you, you feel as though you can not live without them and then looking back now, you see you were better off without that person. Nice job. I like the repetition.

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Wow, that was really good. I'm glad it ended nicely.
    Nice job.