5/5 Loooooong poem but still good might be a few parts i'd change but over all great job,

Beautiful Jeremy. Absolutely beautiful... I really enjoyed this poem. Some poems cannot be short and I thought this was a good length. It was complete and I loved it.

Astryd

Crazy long, but crazy good. I liked it dude, keep it up

Coolness all the way bro, this was so awesome, keep up the great work and thanx for the comment.Ill be reading some more of your work lata.