Comments : Un Valentin Pour Toi

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    This poem sounds Way better in French, but if you don't understand it, here's the translation:

    To show you how I feel
    I'm making a Valentine for you
    I really hope you like it
    because you are the world to me

    It's written in my heart
    I know that I like you
    I want to fall in love with you
    I hope you feel the same
    You are everything
    that makes me smile each day
    thinking about being with you
    is what I wake up for

    I know that I can say I like you
    because it's nothing but the truth
    I want to give you a Valentine
    every year from now on

    See.....Not as "romantic" as the french version! But ya, it took me a week to write this, and I'm so proud of it! Hope you enjoyed It!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    I think it's still romantic. I liked it a lot.
    Great job.