I liked the how the lines flow into each other, i liked the bit about being worthless as well, its so true ppl say ur not but that doesnt change how u feel, a strong poem well done

Great poem. it's sad but true most people feel this way. and u r only as useless as you think you are mind u i'm not exactly one to talk. keep it up though. 5/5

Beautiful ... real ... sad ... happy ... promising ... angry ... tears ... black tears ... blood ... darkness ... terror .... pain ... free ... depleted ... drained ... free ... faint ... darkness ... heaven...rejected....HELL...

i loved it i ^ think you know what i mean by the above ^