Comments : Will you be there

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Aww! That was a very cute poem. I hope your father is there on every special day you have.

    I loved the emotion, the depth, and the heart you put into this one. Nice work :]

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This was a very deep and heartfelt poem i understand what its like not having a dad so i can relate i reeally liked this poem good job