Im not sure I like the repetitive style of this poem. But if you split it in half and forget the today I wake up part I believe you have great potential.Not only do you increase the tempo of the poem but you concentrate on your strengths, (its a whole new day - making my new way) / (holding my head high - setting my eyes upon the sky) logical and the imagary works well.
I think your poems will be enjoyed by many here, Elise