Hey hun good job with this poem. a heartfelt piece. great use of words. xx

This poem is so beautiful.
If you look at the bright sky today
Clouds might form image of my face
Let my open arms take all of your pain
And i'll make sure to dry every drop of rain

This stanza really touched my heart. I love to read your poems they always make me feel good. Thanks for everything. Your Friend Cindy

Wow this is very beautifully written. I just love this poem. Very very nice... keep it up.

"If you stare at your reflection in mirror
Your heart will beat twice at a time
One to express how much I Love You
And the other to say that I Really Do"

Absolutely amazing. This was so very beautiful. Excellent.

Woah this one is really nice, beautiful actually. I really love it. And I can really relate. It's so pretty. Good job 5/5

I love your last 2 lines, they work really well together, excellent writing honey, can't wait for more xox sam

Awwwh this was beautiful.
My favourite part was the last stanza, I thought it was really cute.
Good work!

I realy like this one keep it up 5/5

Makes me want to cry...
it's soo deep... i wish more people understood love the way you do..
great work. .as always
5.5

Much love,
Ipsita

Very deep writing. thts so gr8. i just added you in my favourite list....

Thats a very nice poem!
love it

I really enjoyed reading it!

This poem is full of strong emotions, each sentence flows into the next, and the sentence structure is great. I love this poem.

What a beautiful sentimental verse....so full of love...

If you look outside your window tonight
Every star will remind you of my heart
Some parts of it would fall for you
Just to make your wishes come true

All I can say is whoever voted this one down is just plain jealous and heartless.....I love it! 5/5

Hey, thanks for the comment. I really liked this one.

I guess I didn't come on here for a while cuz my life's been pretty hectic... and you know, I think I just might write a poem now. I don't know if it'll work out though, I just finished crying a while ago... lol.

Awww thats is such a sweet poem i love your last stanza its really cute.