Amazing talent and a very mooving poem every one goes thru shyt but some more than others....nothing lasts forever even though it may seem that way nothing lasts forever so dont give up start a new day.......
jamesX

Very deep poem i liked it very much

Wat a great poem. i like the way you set it out.

5/5 from me too. David

Very good, 5/5 and I'd like to see more of your poems soon :D

Great, Love It, Smooth Flow, Nice Rhymes, 5/5, what more can I say

Wow.. This is amazing... You can feel your pain keep it up 5/5

I really enjoyed how you made your words flow from one to the next.You have a talent in poetry.May you write many more. 5/5