So sad and true your words are. May they live forever...

I love how ur poem has a really good description of the murder...its lyk ....silent, lmao...lol , great job, i loved it , 5/5

Short but good... it made me sad though. That means it must be a good poem

Very Very well written mel You should publish a book i mean it. Your a great writer mel dont stop writing and always tell me when you got a new one thanx love yaz bye!

MEL!!!
It flows so well its a great peom keep up the good work i love how you express the pain and everything ur a great poet!!!

Thats kinda a nice poem eather suicidel or homacidal lol but yea ... must have had some one in mind when you were writeing it ...

Trippy and kinda fantaskic, i like the flow and the style is different than most

hurray for anti-convential(sp?)

monks

It started out really good my favorite part was the beggining and thats the msot important part the only part jsut as important is the end but the whole poem was good jsut remember u want your begginnings and ends to be the best part of your poem = ] and the middle should all fall in place between them