Wow, this was messed up and haunting the last two lines really shocked me and provoked real emotion, from such simple lines you have perfected the whole poem, well done

You have a way with words.
Nice,
-Animus

5 [[excellent]] loved it. =] especially the ending. =] good job.

Wow your a fab writer i think your poems are truely amazing you must love your babi girl she sooooooooooooooooooooooo lucky :D xxx alex xxx