Wow....very very deep. the flow could have been slightly better but it has an impact on its reader...very nice.

That was good..!! 5/5

That was good..!! 5/5

Very nice imagery. Good job.

Hey people just telling you all This Poem "A Cross" HAS BEEN PUBLISHED!!!! it has made it in the coffee table book "Forever Spoken" on the first page of poems!!! its awsome thanx for the people who gave me the support to sudmitt it (elena) it means a lot Bye people talk to you laters!!

Wow...gr8 poem..awesome!!!..keep up the gr8 work...never stop writing:D
tk care brree

Hey good poem
i liked it
keep up the good work =]