I can relate to so much to this poem. i lvoe this poem. u did an amazing job writing it. u have tons of talent. so keep on writing.
take care
luve angie

Good job! Very sad. Your sadness can be felt through this entire write. Take Care Cindy

This makes me wanna cry! it reminds me of me and my one of my ex's. Excellent poem! keep up the good work. 5/5

::starts to sing:: I CAN SEE CLEARLYYY NOOWWWWW.

HAHA.

sorry about that.

i liked this poem, but not so much of the structure. fix it, then it will be wonderful. i also found another typo:
Never thought losing you would have hurt his bad

THIS BAD.

<3 Great job. I love your poetry!

I love this one too My favorite stanza is
Feels like somehow everything you had, they cause you to lose
you bring up walls around your heart no one can break through.
5/5

Simply beautiful