Comments : I'm Looking for a Friend

  • 17 years ago

    by InvisibleGurl

    Hey,

    This is a good poem, nice rhyming.
    I would love a friend like this too. =]

    Shirlz
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    This was great! I'll be your friend.....alothough I know I can't be him..

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    *,, aww this poem is cute. The last stanza was a bit sad though. I loved it, great rhyming and the flow was flawless. I loved the whole repetition of "I'm looking for a friend", that really emphasizes the title.
    Keep it up && Thanks for the comment,,*

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job! This is really good. I enjoyed reading it. Hope things work out for you. Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww this si sweet i loved it nice work!
    *kaila*

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I think there are times when everybody feels like this and you mananged to portray it all brilliantly.
    Excellent write
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by memyselfandI

    This is very good, I'd appreciate it if you would comment and rate some of my work. Im new so there arent many.