Great poem dude 4th one i read from yours and they're all great true poet you are with your words that arnt used in everyday conversations great poet you are

This is such a wonderful write. You have done such a good job on this showing the battle of good vs evil! Excellent!

A nice poem that your faith has inspired you to write. I always like a happy ending.....Good job!

Excellent, quite possibly great. Lovely description. One of the best i've read in a while. 5/5

This is simply amazing, the message and the way it has been potrayed is outstanding

loved it all the way

all the best and take care

Another great one hits the boards. Congrats!

This was amazing!
I loved everything in this poem, your words your tone just everything. The message you were trying to relay was great and I feel as though you have touched most of the audience who has read this.

great job.
5/5