Comments : Winter's Beauty

  • 13 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Is this too short? Should more be added. I like it the way it is, but I was wondering if you feel that there needs to be more.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    More, we need more lines . I agree with Kitty. baited breath and a hook with strings attached need to reel into this poem a few more lines of emotion. its a bud waiting to bloom