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Is this too short? Should more be added. I like it the way it is, but I was wondering if you feel that there needs to be more.
by Tom Swart
More, we need more lines . I agree with Kitty. baited breath and a hook with strings attached need to reel into this poem a few more lines of emotion. its a bud waiting to bloom