Positivley perfect rhymes! They didn't seemed too forced. It had a really great flow too. Wonderful read! 5/5

marcella

Beautiful poem, and the rhythm was great. Also I enjoyed the feeling the text carried the entire way through. Great job.

I can relate to this poem a lot, which im sure a lot of people can since it's a love one. It was very heartwarming. It showed a lot of emotion and the flowed stayed pretty much steady. It was great.

Wow i love this poem! you are an amazing writer! you should def. write more poems like this!=] 5/5

Oh this is so beautiful. i love all your work. you have a great talent... well done =)
p.s. the rhyming in this poem works so well

I loved this, I thought it was beautifully written.
I enjoyed the imagery and wording and I thought it flowed very well.
You did a wonderful job with this.

Oh wow. everything in this poem was wonderfu. however, i felt that there was no story; your words just captivated me to such a degree.

wow. amazing work, eekp up the great job!

"Burning in my heart
It is tearing me apart
All those times are gone
And it feels so wrong"

This is so sad. Very touching poem.

Nice