This wss a sad love story, i feel as though many girls have these thoughts [i have]

the words & descriptions are wonderful & the flow was great as well.
5/5

Good poem! I gave it a four, you did have some spelling errors, but besides that it was awesome! you really have some talent. Someday you will shine. Rate and Comment mine

The terror of mere days
without you
haunts
my every thought
(My favorite part.)