Comments : Pretend

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I understand the way you feel my friend love can change your life in many different ways. The poem was short and sweet and as always had ill flow lol 5/5 buddy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Because I've grown with you, and I've grown for you
    I've grown under you, your love proved true."

    Excellent.. the meanings that can be pulled from this could hold so much depth..
    Nicely written
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    I agree with *gem* very deep that line and great poem as well 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Linh

    I completeli understand the meaning of this..and somehow..it's very meaningful to me deep deep down!! good job!