I SO GET THIS ONE! i love it Goran. its pretty simple from what you usually do which changes it i love it. 5/5

~king Drake

Well not that bad..pretty good 5/5 keep it up.

I personaly liked it. tears and cry. melded them in. all makes sense. it is cool. short yet sweet. isn't that the famous saying? lol

5/5 David

Nicely written....how we try to spare the ones we love our sorrows.

Hello
this one is very different and very sad...
it is always the case with the person that is very dear to us and close to our heart but i bet those people would really want to know...becaus they are the one who can help u and spare u the pain of going through those hard time alone.......but u never know what love can do....it always seeks the others happiness and keep all the sorrow to him/her self...love is not selfish, it likes to give and awaits nothing in return..
great job...
hope to see more poem by my favorit poet of all time but i hope it to be all happinesss.

Short but beautiful 5/5 as always!

For not eventhe last thing
I wish to see,
Are your tears,
Rolling in streams,
Down your sweet, soft cheek.

<3

Great poem. 5/5.

In such a few words such great emotion! You are a very good poet! Never forget that.

It was so simple poem but it has a deeply meaning! great imgary and nice flow.. it was touchy and very heartfelt 5/5

So amazing poem. Like there is a huge meaning behind every word and it makes this poem so deep. So simple and sweet.
Truely amazing write! I love this poem. 5/5

I like how you rhymed the last lines... but it's almost mediocre, although there's plenty of emotion. i like how you showed such emotion in such minimal lines
good job 4/5

~Sandra