Oooer...this one was awsome. It had a nice flow to it. Keep up the good work, you have excellent writing skills. *5/5*

Alyson

Very good

Very well done sam

...very nice...

Cool subject and you had me hanging on each sentence, love your black and white pic too

Wow! I really like it!!! especially the line "His robe drapes past the future" beautiful concept. truly lovely poem! great work!

Nice word choice here. The rhymes were nice too. Good read. 5/5

marcella

This is so dark and beautiful! 5/5

Mmmmmmmmmm