Good poem, i liked it

your servant:
david

That was so beautifully yet sadly written. All of your poems have expressed the strong love the both shared. 5/5

I love this...so beautiful. the flow is perfect. i love reading your work so much...

"Crying into my pillow
Looking for some relief
From these sleepless nights
And this endless grief"
i love those last few lines. they make the piece work so well.
wonderful work - em

Cindy you have written another excellent piece here

Crying into my pillow
Looking for some relief
From these sleepless nights
And this endless grief

Very heartfelt and beautiful....5/5

I think this poem really relate to me.cuz there is a girl to who i love allot.. your wrk is so gr8. may you live long. and may god give you more power to write such a good things like this. take care. and i have added you in my favorite list. gd luck

Well done Cindy.
i loved this one
xxxxx
love Tara-Kay

This was so very sad..yet beautifully written as always.
The first stanza was such a perfect opening, the last stanza such a perfect ending.
Wonderful work.