This was a very good poem!
It looks like you spent quite sum time on it!
Great job
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5/5

That was another really well written poem. You use great words and have strong endings which are two things I definately look for in a poem. Great work again. =] 5/5

Tammie

The rhyme scheme is very very off. Again, as your "Revolving Heart" poem, the rhyming seems forced.

Yet, in this poem the emotion is definately clear, and I like that.

I really liked this the emotions deep and strong you worded it very well. the time you put into t made it great 5/5 work on caps tho great great great