Comments : Pain and gain

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris

    Great poem, a little dark for me, but thats just my taste... glad to see you writing again, keep up the good work.

    ~Bert

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Wow you got checkl out thr poet on this site called koriey you'll relate
    also a tip stop explaining ur poems
    they talk 4 themselves like in that one about ur 16 b.d.
    ITS like you don't think we will understand so u explain but u don't have to. ur talent speakes 4 itself
    got it lol cy

  • 16 years ago

    by why is life so miserable

    Awesome poem 5/5 cynthia m. X]

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Good poem
    sad but good