Ok. Very graphic, especially with the ideas of how to kill the speaker.
The flow was ok too, just dipped a little in the fourth stanza.
The rhymes were basic, but then again it did fit in with the poem because it was a straightforward write, and understandable.
If I hadn't read the ending note, I would have carried on thinking it was just bad usage of sticky caps, but the idea was creative.
One more thing, can you not think of a more creative word than "brown" in the last stanza?
Not bad, very discusting and graphic, haha.

It shows a raw emotion from the speaker in your poem, and I can feel it. The flow went well, and your descriptions were well-detailed and very grotesque, but it fits the statement you're wanting to make. I think this is one of my favorite poems done by you, even though I haven't been around for awhile, and I absolutely love the poem as a whole. It just shines with your talent to make the reader feel what the speaker is feeling. Amazing!

Lol, it says "HIHATEYOU"
not "IHATEYOU"

anyway, it was excellent

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Deep dark powerful emotions in this piece. Graphic imagery. Although not my favorite genre, you have done a good job.

Creative title. Wonderful imagery, very painful. The vocab was nice, and the flow was awesome. 5/5.

This is a good piece. I like the flow and your wordings. There is still need for improvement like all poems would have. But its really a good piece.

Nice job i really liked it. lol i liked what u did with the title btw
<3 emma

I realized it says "I HATE YOU" when I was looking at the name. This poem has so much feeling, I can definitley see your point of view. I really have an infatuation for this poem, too. Beautiful.