The last comment....may I suggest
you read the poem again.....many out there...like this poem...thanks for your comment but I feel you have not understood what has been written. From the heart....is sometimes beyond words
I really like it. There were a few time's when I found my self reading ahead; thinking there was a different comming that just wasnt there-if that makes any sense at all. All in all it is a well thought out piece.