There's alot of emotion in this and I can really feel it. I, as well as alot of other people, could definately relate to the word 'love' being used too lightly. I really enjoyed reading this, you had great word choice and flow. Keep it up. =]

Tammie

I am not very impressed. The stanzas seems very drawn out. Some rhymes were very forced. I also had to reread some lines because they were so jumbled-looking.

Tips(Take them or leave them):

"like a random shirt or sash"

Very very random line. I understand the comparison but it seemed as if you were just looking for something to rhyme.

"making me hate you hating me"

The same word twice in one line. With the exception of I, doing that just confuses the reader.

Hope I helped. Overall, not a bad read.

I loved this!! I hate how you have to go through this crap though! it's no fun! nice poem!