I love this poem. It's one of my favorites of yours. The first stanza is great, I like your descriptions. The rhyming came out so naturally and the flow is flawless. I like the story and the ending is strong. We all wish we could turn back time, even for only an hour sometimes. Great write. 5/5

Tammie

This was just fantastico lol i just adored it to bits and bits lol the emotion and everything about it was thrilling i adored it
5/5

Awesome, david. such a natural flow. very well penned. it has a quality of innocense. well,in my wierdo opinion. you are very well versed! -beav

Wow this is amazing! i love the emotion you put into this!!! wonderful!! =o]

First line, third stanza, where it says I be... I think it's supposed to be.. something else lol. sorry I just woke up. But overall I thought it was very well written. 5/5

marcella

Wow..this was really good one of my favorite poems from you for sure! nice work!

Wow, i love the choice of words. awsum poem

much love and many kisses,
bex

I think that is a secret wish we all harbor, to be able to turn the clock back, and do something over, but if we do, then all the things we have now, all the lessons we've learned, go away... the poem was amazing as usual David.. you are such a wonderful poet!! All your poems have such a meaning, great job... 5/5 my friend
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

This is a great poem with great meaning.
You write really good poems,
and i'll always comment back.
5/5
-Kelsey