Hey... i feel your pain. going through a similar situation. I liked it, it was smooth and meaningful. I gave 5.

(*sniff, sniff*) That is so sad Charisma. My favorite line and the one that evokes the most emotion is, "Regrets keep whispering
The words I couldn't say."
Truly beautiful, hun. Keep up the AMAZING work! :)
~Midnight Sun

I love the flow in this one. Nicely worded and full of emotion. Again, a great job!

Great poem. Alot of emotion was put into it. Good job 5/5

Aww, that is very cute! I love the ryhme scheme!
5/5
xox-am

The flow was AWESOME! I loved how you had rhymed it! 5/5. I'm speechless with your poems yet amazed. Great write.

That is really good - very sad to loose someone because of those words that choke up in our throat. Brilliant writing - oh and by the way - LOVED your poem you entered in the competition! I'll be judging them soon. :)

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wow... such simple words... but still this going to have to be another one of my favorites.. the flow is PERFECT TO THE 'T' lol :D and the rhyming is great as well.. clever idea also

Wow great poem 5/5 xx

Wow.. i love this poem.. def something many people can relate to.. sometimes the things we don't say . matter more than the things we do say.. very very nicely written.. seriously excellent job.. keep it up =]

Aw this is very nicley written.. the same kind of thing happened to me..

This is really good... i think everyone can relate : ) keep it up
<3 jess

I no how u feel, i feel pain in so many ways, and i feel your pain right here.. GREAT JOB in word usage and i loved you overall peom

Throughout this whole poem I had someone in mind and gave you a 5/5 on the fact that you were able to make me see myself in your poetry. It was a wonderful poem I just think the ending could've ended a little more differently with a little more closure to the poem. But still, great!

Get outta my head missy ! Lol, sheesh, every single poem I read is like what I feel on paper...on screen I should say lol. Absolutely loved this pieve, the rhyming and flow were perfect, keep it up.

5.5
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