Ooo this is very nice... i'm not really into all the girl on girl stuff, but this seems to paint a very sensual immage, you should read a few of my explicit peoms, perhaps, CHILDS F**K. or. MY BOYFRIENDS BROTHER.. oor my new one THURSTY LUST... i think you would enjoy them.. this poem is very well written.. i like it.. 4/5
-Marina.

Nice,,, very nice

LoL this poem sounds more like a story, but its still good it kind of made me want to go lesbian for a sec.

ELECTRIFYING !!!!

Hmmm very nice! Did this actually happen? :-p xx

Awesome!

I love it...reminds me of the good days!!!!

Wow

I like it. the deatails are good.

Wow......U had my bf and starting to get really turned on! By this poem and the one with the two guys and you.
Feel free to e mail me at badgurl1982_2002@hotmail.com :) keep writing5/5

Interesting...I have read many poems like that before...it was pretty good

BOOOOIIIIINNNNGGGGG!!!!!!!MAKES ME WISH I WAS THERE WITH A POP AND SOME CHIPS, LOVED IT ALOT, WOW!!!