This poem is very unique. I like it. 5/5

Oh.My.Gosh! 5/5 AMAZING WORK! Another great write by you. Another great piece of work. Your on my favorites list for sure!!

Happy Valentines Day!

It was good, but i didn't really get it. it wasn't clear as to what was happening. the flow was a little off too, i had to reread in some places... just look over it again, it was a good write though

I thought this was a great poem but i got kind of confused but that was prolly just me for i just woke up lol but it was good keep it up

Good write! A lot of emotion in this one. Altough, it didn't too well in some parts. 5/5

marcella

I was surprized when it starting flowing so nicely and its got a nice point! i love it! =) thank you for my comment by the way =) 5/5

That was really sad, i hope it not from personal experience. It had a really nice flow to it and it was really unique. i liked it 5/5