I love it. one part boldness, one part truth, and one part stepping on the bad man's toes. you're all like cross the rubicon and stuff. i liken your poems to a twelve foot tall viking warrior with a dainty pen in one hand and a club in the other. but i digress
This is really well written it definitely deserves a 5! and thanks so much for the comment I did put my heart into it.. I tried to make it seem like something a firefighter would be thinking.. how much courage they had.. they're true heroes..
United we have sworn to stand!!! that was definitely my fav. part it was a good poem i thnk its definitely my new fav of yours. i think it really touches the readers i know it did me. i liked it, alot great job!
ur fav lil sis