Wow, this is very well writin, its extremely sad, and i know how you feel, if you ever need to talk i'm here for you. comment some of my poems, and i hope everything gets better for you
-hayley

That was a brilliant write. The heartfelt message behind the poem was powerful and it gives me an insight to people who, previously, I've failed to understand. Great write.

Wow this is really good!! you are a great writer! i loved this poem very much. it's really sad, but you did a great job writing it! i can relate to it! if you need to talk i'm here for you =] 5/5

~Kristina

A little weird but good. Good job and keep it up.

You gave me goose bumps it was so deep. very good!