I'm glad this was for a contest and it's not about me!! lol
But well written as always bbz, you always manage to write something no matter what the limitations..
Proud of you!!
See you soon honey
Love Marcus xxx

I really like this one :) in the mood that im in at the moment i definelty know where id send it :( great poem 99/5

"That it was all a game
A game where I would lose
How was I supposed to play?
Without knowing the rules?"

What a stanza! That's great!! And as you know, stupid Jake did the same thing to me :] but, whatever. I've moved on, [[well, not completely]] but I'm on my way. You don't get over your first love this quick. But great poem! I loved it!
xoxo

I Love This Poem! Great Job Eh! 5/5! I Hope Your Insperation is back!! =)

"You knew it all along
That you were using me
But I was blinded by your charm
And I could never see"

This is what I worry about sometimes.
Great poem.

Great poem :)

Loved it nice work! 5/5 *kaila*

Gem
I love this one. Excellent job! Flow is great. Word choices great! Take care your friend Cindy

Loved your second to last stanza. This was a good poem Gem. Glad to see ya posting. I added some new ones to my featured so others can read them and comment. Good job!
Charisma*

The flow was smooth and the poem was strong. i loved this one.

I loved it!...it was sooo good!....your an amazing writer!....such talent!....5/5..comment back please?!

Wonderful poem. The flow was excellent. Good job 5/5

Hey hun i realyl liked this poem keep it up xx

That it was all a game
A game where I would lose
How was I supposed to play?
Without knowing the rules?

that stanza really got to me. absolutely loved it! wow! this was a great poem:) great great. lol im kinda speechless.

Your poems leave me speechless!

Wow i really like this poem!
reminds me of something thats recently happened to me

its a really gud poem, nicely written!

xxx