I love you Gem
Happy Valentines Day
And you know for a fact i can relate to this poem.
Until i found you, Cupid was tearing his hair out over me
Love you
Marcus xx

I sooo hate cupid too :( I swear that lil bugger is blind! Great poem Gem :) 99/5

:] finally a poem that explains how bad cupid can be sometimes! But also, how good he can be. Lovely babe!
xoxo

I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this one.

Great job. 5/5 Marcus is very lucky.

Such a sweet poem, i kinda feel like cupids picking on me lol
Great flow and rhyming, never faultered once. Brightened my valentine's day up reading this, to know there is true love out there :)
5/5

This was so sweet and cute, Gemma! I love the whole idea of the poem. I can't really say I relate to this particular poem, but I know many can you did a great job relating it. Keep it up! 5/5 as always! :)
~Midnight Sun

Once again gem loved the poem! nice job cupid is dumb sometimes but 5/5 love the poem
*kaila*

So cute

Gem you are doing quite well with these contest writes. Excellent job! This just flowed right along. Thinking of you! Love Cindy

Second place.

I love the trial and error idea in this poem. It's not what I had envisioned for this poem. You did a great job. Best of wishes to you and your boyfriend!

Awww! cute! i loved it! you are so talented! keep it up!!

VERY GOOD WRITE. IMPECABLE FLOW. GLAD YOU FOUND THE ONE WHO BRINGS YOU JOY. 5/5

"It was just a game of trial and error
To find the right person for me"

Wow, you're talented.

I usually try and leave some sort of constructive criticism when I comment on people's poems, but there is not a single thing that you should be changing. This particular poem is very sweet, but all of them are amazing.

And you're one of the few people on the forums who gives out sane advice. :P lol.

Great job, and good luck with your fiance.xx

Very nice. Nice lines to end the poems. Enjoyed it a lot!

Until one day on the first of Feb
He had someone new in his sight
He brought me together with Marcus Stott
For the first time he got it right
^^^^
Awww Gem I love this stanza.
I read Marcus's comment and was like awwww. You are both so blesses to of found each other. I wish you both all the happiness in the world, you surely deserve it sweets.

Great poem. It was well written. Good job 5/5

This is an amazing poem i must say gem!
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aww thanks hunny
yea a month after is sorta weird
and when i read your poem over again
i was like was that for a reason?
knowing me i will dwell on it
its something that i have always done
especially with my dad and everything.
I knew the pain wasn't going to get better
in a month but we have to remember
that it does get better over time
and we can't go living our lives wishing
they were with us again. our nanas
are in a better place sweetie.
i am here to help you through
comment back please
<3333
xx.chelsea.xx

What a lovely valentine's dedication...this is really so sweet, as always love reading your poems.

came after a long time as this site was bit messed up in between.

all the best and take care

Hey darl this was really good i loved every word in every line. xx

Wow...loved it. i loved how it went from being like...BAH stop picking on me...to like a thank you. i justr loved this, the wording was great. 5/5