This was so very sad, yet so beautifully written.
The flow was flawless and the longing and pain behind the words were clear to see.
The imagery was wonderful.
As always, excellent work.

This poem was very touching. In the beginning I felt like it showed your high points in this relationship, and how everything was wonderful, and then I felt it dwindle with each stanza. wonderful write, your wording was perfect.

5/5

Oh, how sad but very well written.
5/5

Wow this was so powerful! loved the emotion!

Waah!! it made me sad.. this is a very emotional poem..

So moving...i no how you feel i'v lost nearly everything last year x

WOW THAT WAS SOO GOOD YOU LEFT ME SPEACHLESS AGIN ONCE MORE

Dosn't it suck when u cant get what u want?? ... :-( good poem.. loved it!! keep it up!! 5/5

So sad, yet I know the feeling. you left me breathless, with every word you wrote. The flow again amazing, the word choice brillant, the vocab perfect, and the emtion powerful. again you have outdone yourself. 5/5 although I sincerely wish I could give you more. keep it up.

My friend,

first of all i congrats you because your this poem is so great work. you realy have alot of talent.

now i will talk to you about the this poem
my friend, that was an excellent piece of work i realy loved this way of writing. the poem was greatly structured wiht deep emotions. this is the truth love feeling you realy know the meaning of love. your love shines from your syes still, that is great.
good work 5/5
and take care

Awwww wow this is amazing.. i def can relate to this.. you probably know that since some of my poems are kinda about the same thing..

Sometimes I wish she'd write or call.
Or stop by my house one day.

I can DEFINITELY relate to that.. it sucks when someone you love or loved just disappears from your life and you have no way of getting in touch with them.. it really does suck.. nice job though like always =] 5/5

Good poem

=(
"Just when I had it all,
I went and threw everything away"

i know how that is.

this was excellent! i've had a few different times that i went through that same situation, i hated it.. yet sometimes i was that girl...

i love how you express everything so perfectly... another good one =)

on my favorites!
5/5