Its sad, but beautifully written all the same.
When her glowing eyes become dull
When her shiny hair dies and falls out
When her smooth skin dries and cracks
Would you still love her for her mind?

That part jumped out at me and really struck my heart. Its something that I think most woman think of. *5/5*

Alyson

This poem is so true men only want beauty and when women grow old and lose their beauty what then, i loved it good job 5/5

Wow...this poem is true..most men only want women for their beauty they dont care about their personality or anything else....but this poem is good... ur very talented.

Wow,a really good poeint to ask,really well done

I think everyone can relate to this poem. ANother well written poem... beautiful. Great write! 5/5

marcella