Hey...i love this poem! your a good writer. so keep it up! it just makes u feel shit when no one comments or anything i know how you feel, i dont get any. but then again unlike yours, mine are shit and prb not worth it anyway! but well done...5/5 i love it!! ciao, Britt xx

Good rhyme and wording, I enjoyed reading this. Take care. Keep writing, always and forever....