Comments : Our Moonlight Dance

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    This was deep. and beautiful. very expressive and very powerful.

    The stars glisten
    To tell me what I want to hear
    The wind howls
    To give me music to listen to

    i loved that stanza the most. it was a great opening. i loved the way you wrote this it was so heartfelt. job well done! 5/5.

    -Ashlei.