Comments : Break my heart

  • 17 years ago

    by Daniel mac

    Hey good poem !!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kim the Star

    Great poem! =]
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Solus

    Too bad love and pain go togather hand in hand...

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Aw this is sad, its always sad when a love ends but try and think on the bright side this just means that there is someone better out there for you. You will realise this in time and then it wont hurt so bad. Nice write though.
    "I'll never stop loving you..
    Even if it breaks my heart..
    It's OK..
    I'm used to the sound of it slowly ripping apart."

    I loved this stanza its my favorite out of them all.. it sends a very good message to what you are feeling

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    The rhymes are good... the whole topic is a little too cliche for me... and the flow was off in places.. however... once again you described your emotions very well ... :)