I really like this poem! Gave it 5/5!

Wow brilliant i thought the continous input of just a girl would ruin the poem

but how wrong was i!!

The continous input of just a girl makes the poem flow so well!! well done brilliant!

WoW I just love the way you wrote the poem, the words you used....5/5 great job keep it up.

Aw. your rhyming is amazing. ok. i need to stop reading your poems and start looking at that thesaurus right now!

Wow. This was really good! I loved the repetition of ''just a girl'' and then at the end it switches to ''just a boy''. The last stanza was my favorite. Cos of the fact that you switched over. & it really summed the poem up.

It flowed really well & Nothing seemed forced. Excellent job.

Bri x

THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE POEMS...5/5