AWWW i loved it!...so cute!....thanks for the comments!....haha....5/5 great job!....comment back? haha

Aw... this is cute.. the flow is nice.. and you let out your emotion.. the idea is cliche... but nice job

Hmm...at first i thought this poem was supposed to be rhyming, but then after the first stanza, it was all non-rhyming..so im thinking maybe you should try to change the first stanza to non-rhyming too si it would all fit together..otherwise, very cute, great ending and keep it up:)

This was good I liked the ending 5/5
*kaila*

Aww, i really thought that was sweet, but sad.
chin up

much love and many kisses,
bex

I like the first stanza the most, but overall it was a good poem.

I like the first stanza the most, but overall it was a good poem.

I like the first stanza the most, but overall it was a good poem.

Awesome
eyes are a really good thing to use in poems, ifind.
because...well they show everyone's true emotion.
great job.

I liked the poem, but I thought it was a little weird how at first it rhymed but then the rest didn't but other than that, great job!

Hahaha, we both write about hazel eyes

we have this in commen then,lol
this was another great one.
i love your poems as they are all lovely and you know how to express your self, keep it up and for sure i will be checking on u for your new poems,lol
you better write some more so i can read them and tiz my heart.

Amazing poem! nice flow and format! lol super cute and well written!.-*-.

----tara

Wow i like your poem i wish i could thell the guy i like almost the same thing but i know that i dont stand a chance....well not any more

Si, this poem is very beautiful, and I loved the title! I'm not usually a fan of love poems, but this one has depth and originality, fantastic.