Very well written! =]
5/5

This write has meaning and a very nice view of what love is.

sadaddy

It was pretty good but if you spent more time and rewrite it i think you could make it amazing

Beautiful poem bby very heartfelt and describes love so well 5/5 keep it up bby
x take care x

I love the poem it so well written keep up the good work 5/5

Tht was gd i felt the flow was excelent 5/5

Pretty wicked KIM

I don't lyk this poem... but you kept refering back to flowers i think its pretty dumb.

It was quite sweet.
In terms of improvement, there are a few words that could be altered to make it better.
On the second line it should be "window pane." On the nineth line it should be "falling off trees."
Also, reading the poem out loud I noticed that in the fifth stanza the rhyme maybe incorrect. My pronunciation of "sew" rhymes with "so" rather than "you." Maybe it's the difference in accent.
Anyway apart from that, this was a very good write.
Thanks for sharing.

I loved the repetition of "love us" at the beginning and end of each stanza ..

I loved the repetition of "love us" at the beginning and end of each stanza ..