Sweetie that was so well done. i always love your work babe. never can't!!!! don't change a thing. thanks 4 my comment. i liked it like that too. it just sort of happened and I was like i really want to keep the whole i trust in you thing throuout the poem and yea it just seemed right. thanks. *hugs*

ps. happy valentines day back at u babe. my computer messing up so I can't send stuff over myspace but yea :) love you love you love you a million times my american friend *bigfatwetsloppykiss*

Huh, funny i like it 5/5

I liked this one it was great
p.s. that last stanza meant that he was better at lying then the rest

Wow i loved everything you put into this poem. its deep. this is probably my favorite so far!