What's Left

by RavishingEruption   Feb 16, 2007


Broken hearts and shattered dreams
this is all that's left of me.

Sorrow fills the Lonely heart
placed there by nights we spent apart.

Burning tears Slice down my face
leaving only a shining trace.

Dying trees now catch my gaze
living out the final days.

You tore my heart and crashed my dreams
this is all that's left of me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by withlove

    Wow
    this poem was short but it hit me and i thought u did a good job of expressing ur emotions
    i think the repetition of the line this is all thats left of me at the end had a nice effect too
    one suggestion. i think it would sound better if u said living out their final days instead of the final days
    good job
    5/5
    =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Wow wow wow! vry good.. got a gr8 flow!
    love it..
    .x

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Good, but filled with overused images...sorry.

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